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I listen as beautiful elegies take control
It seems like nothing will stop the spreading
And suddenly I live with this
But wonder if you see it too.

I will embrace you,
As you drift into me
With unrivaled consequences of our love
And only ice blocked my path

I watched you grow
And you grew with affection for me
Just as I had an exquisite fondness for your beauty
And together songs appeared so lovely to touch

\"Together\" can seem so graceful,
When soft-spoken into each other\'s ear
Of such words you speak in your manner
And a sound as beautiful as your own

Eternal thoughts filled hearts with joy
Nothing can seem to break the conviction of love.
We held hands in a grace to not fall
From a height we had grown to despise and fear

You could watch a thousand stars,
Fall into the nightime felt sun
To be burned into ashes
Just as all the flowers disintegrated

I watched with pleasure,
As all the flowers despised you
For being so fortunate with love
And for the bitter taste their lungs were left to hold

I sometimes find it hard to sleep
But only because the cold is troublesome to my lips
And your taste has been engraved
On a once broken heart

This redundancy is one I have grown to love
It has filled me with unaccountable joy,
To which I owe being able to know
That an angel has been sent to bless me

Your presence is wonderful and amazing
I find it hard to believe what beauty has contained
Hidden away from me for so many years
But now I am alive again with nothing but your love
And the sound of a certain song filling you with joy.
©2003-2009 ~wanderingtruths
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Another "happy" poem...yea...dont sue me.

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i only read the first few stanzas cause i didn't have enough time, but i wanted to say one thing before i forget. you used elegies in the wrong context, you might of meant to, but unlikely cause you submitted under romantic...

an elegy is a sad poem or lammentation of someone who died.
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Wow.... i have nothing else to say... wow is such an understatement. This is so good. Amazing.

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And if you were with me tonight
I'd sing to you just one last time
A song for a heart so big
God wouldn't let it live
May Angels lead you in.

*In memory ~Kindra Roshell Brown~*
July 8, 1984- April 22, 2005
:iconwanderingtruths:
now that i think about it, i think elegies does fit...for me...but at the time i will admit i didn't want it to fit totally...so yea...confusing...but it all makes sense in my mind...thanks for the criticism Earl

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June 4, 2003

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