Hey, i think this is the one i didnt comment on myspace, im curious at how much seeing the picture would change the poem, but the first time reading it through, im glad there isnt an illustration, because its completely about your writing, and nothing to do with a picutre... and thats how i prefer it most the time, but then again, i haven't seen the picture, maybe it would change it, and for the better.

the poem...

the first stanza isnt my favorite, but you made it better with the second, and then the third is beautiful. with not seeing the picture, i can picture in my head what i think the picture should look like, maybs thats why i dont like illustrations... because then its not what i think it should look like, but then again, it is your writing, so its a good perspective to see what inspired you.. im rambling... its beautiful.... no suprised there.

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And if you were with me tonight
I'd sing to you just one last time
A song for a heart so big
God wouldn't let it live
May Angels lead you in.

*In memory ~Kindra Roshell Brown~*
July 8, 1984- April 22, 2005

this is excellent i thought. i like the structure, the whole leading to the end thing. very nice. how have you been by the way?