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A New Face for a New Room by ~wanderingtruths:iconwanderingtruths:



A heavy beeping
Is all that's needing
For me to finally pull the plug.

As if it mattered
The silence just clatters
The open room I'm now living in.

But I'm filling it up
With all of the cups
Of the water that I drink now

Cause the old room
Filled with the old brooms
Served me rather well until now.

So now I'm putting up new pictures
Hoping that they'll be a lasting fixture
Of a future with that one Face

Because that face
Is now the brace
That holds all my loving attention.
:iconwanderingtruths:

Author's Comments

a step in a new direction from practically everything that i've put up here. well ok there are some "happy" pieces on here but for the most part not really.
oh and i tried rhyming too...that's new. wait did i just do it again?

tell me what you really think!

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:iconbellesolitario:
You actually made the rhyming work... teach me how! lol

This is actually really cute... I unterstand most of it, a few things I dont, but either way its relatable, and yea.. really cute!

:#1: do you see how many new emoticons there are?? lol crazy-ness!

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You were better to me than I was to myself,
For me there's you, and there ain't no body else
I wanna stop, and thank you baby
I just wanna stop, and thank you baby
Oh yea, How sweet it is to be loved by you.
:iconwanderingtruths:
idk lately in everything i've written i've tried rhyming. don't ask me why its just something i've tried. so i can't really teach you it just comes to me lol but i'm glad you liked it. actually i haven't even shown it to who it's about so yea...i'm hoping she likes it too lol

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"Revenge...is a meal best served cold..."-Denzel Washington in, Man On Fire

some day...maybe I can be forgiven. Maybe all of this can be forgotten...but in the instant, I am lost...

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